Comments on: [Pitch Black/Riddick] Addicted; Riddick/male, slash http://blackbirch.net/storysize/stories/pitch-blackriddick-addicted-riddickmale-slash/ - stories and random writings, drabbles and non-squiggly somethings akin to poetry Fri, 10 Sep 2010 20:09:33 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 By: J http://blackbirch.net/storysize/stories/pitch-blackriddick-addicted-riddickmale-slash/comment-page-1/#comment-594 J Sat, 03 Apr 2010 11:12:18 +0000 http://blackbirch.net/?p=7#comment-594 wow, very hot! Great touch with the dom/sub side - not overboard and feels fresh. wow, very hot! Great touch with the dom/sub side - not overboard and feels fresh.

]]> By: BlackBirch http://blackbirch.net/storysize/stories/pitch-blackriddick-addicted-riddickmale-slash/comment-page-1/#comment-591 BlackBirch Thu, 17 Apr 2008 08:14:48 +0000 http://blackbirch.net/?p=7#comment-591 Hello newtson, thanks for the comments. It's always interesting to hear what people think. Reg the errors - as I'm not a native speaker of English it's not sure I'll actualy notice them at all. Swedish is a lot different from English grammar. I'd be happy to have the stories betaread. If you want to you can contact me blackbirch.net at gmail I have a busy workschedule though so I might not be quick to do the editing, but if you're ok with not so swift communication... :) Hello newtson,
thanks for the comments. It’s always interesting to hear what people think.

Reg the errors - as I’m not a native speaker of English it’s not sure I’ll actualy notice them at all. Swedish is a lot different from English grammar. I’d be happy to have the stories betaread. If you want to you can contact me blackbirch.net at gmail

I have a busy workschedule though so I might not be quick to do the editing, but if you’re ok with not so swift communication… :)

]]> By: newtson http://blackbirch.net/storysize/stories/pitch-blackriddick-addicted-riddickmale-slash/comment-page-1/#comment-589 newtson Wed, 16 Apr 2008 22:27:00 +0000 http://blackbirch.net/?p=7#comment-589 The only real problems are gramatical and mixed up tenses. It wont take much to iron them out; you've let it sit long enough to be able to work them out on your own if you want to. If not, I'm more than happy to beta for you, although I've never edited someone's work without meeting them face to face. The only real problems are gramatical and mixed up tenses. It wont take much to iron them out; you’ve let it sit long enough to be able to work them out on your own if you want to. If not, I’m more than happy to beta for you, although I’ve never edited someone’s work without meeting them face to face.

]]> By: BlackBirch http://blackbirch.net/storysize/stories/pitch-blackriddick-addicted-riddickmale-slash/comment-page-1/#comment-17 BlackBirch Mon, 25 Feb 2008 20:55:19 +0000 http://blackbirch.net/?p=7#comment-17 Thank you! And I plan to, when I have time. At the moment RL work is kicking my ass, so it'll have to wait a while to be set on print. Stories are alive and kicking in my head though *g* Thank you! And I plan to, when I have time. At the moment RL work is kicking my ass, so it’ll have to wait a while to be set on print. Stories are alive and kicking in my head though *g*

]]> By: Furyan Goddess http://blackbirch.net/storysize/stories/pitch-blackriddick-addicted-riddickmale-slash/comment-page-1/#comment-16 Furyan Goddess Mon, 25 Feb 2008 20:22:10 +0000 http://blackbirch.net/?p=7#comment-16 That was very hot... I like these two together and you should write more of them together... That was very hot… I like these two together and you should write more of them together…

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