Comments for Black Birch

Comment on [Pitch Black/Riddick] Addicted; Riddick/male, slash by J

Sat, 03 Apr 2010 11:12:18 +0000

wow, very hot! Great touch with the dom/sub side - not overboard and feels fresh.

Comment on [Torchwood] Playing favourites, Jack/Gwen/Ianto, slash/het 3some by Heather

Heather — Tue, 06 Oct 2009 11:03:22 +0000

Heya just to say this fic is fantastic! Just what I’d imagined. Please do add me on msn as I would love to roleplay with you! : torchwood-fan@hotmail.co.uk

xxx

Comment on [Pitch Black/Riddick] Puppet on a string; Riddick/male, slash by devlan

devlan — Wed, 10 Jun 2009 01:54:49 +0000

holy. crud. vin diesel is pretty damned hot and the thought of his hands- going to go watch pb and cor and blush. thanks for this- very nicely done

Comment on [Pitch Black/Riddick] Addicted; Riddick/male, slash by BlackBirch

BlackBirch — Thu, 17 Apr 2008 08:14:48 +0000

Hello newtson,
thanks for the comments. It’s always interesting to hear what people think.

Reg the errors - as I’m not a native speaker of English it’s not sure I’ll actualy notice them at all. Swedish is a lot different from English grammar. I’d be happy to have the stories betaread. If you want to you can contact me blackbirch.net at gmail

I have a busy workschedule though so I might not be quick to do the editing, but if you’re ok with not so swift communication…

Comment on [Pitch Black/Riddick] Puppet on a string; Riddick/male, slash by newtson

newtson — Wed, 16 Apr 2008 22:45:28 +0000

Still mixing tenses and some grammer errors. I like the numerical sequence of it.

Comment on [Pitch Black/Riddick] Addicted; Riddick/male, slash by newtson

newtson — Wed, 16 Apr 2008 22:27:00 +0000

The only real problems are gramatical and mixed up tenses. It wont take much to iron them out; you’ve let it sit long enough to be able to work them out on your own if you want to. If not, I’m more than happy to beta for you, although I’ve never edited someone’s work without meeting them face to face.

Comment on [Pitch Black/Riddick] A con’s Christmas; Riddick/male, slash by newtson

newtson — Wed, 16 Apr 2008 04:01:36 +0000

Hot, until the very end, which is hilarious.

Comment on [Pitch Black/Riddick] Riddick pondering sun and his future shinejob, no pairing by newtson

newtson — Wed, 16 Apr 2008 03:44:16 +0000

Damn. I like this depth of character; alot of people try to make him out to be all mushy inside just because a few people trust him in the movies. I like where your going with this, the cold bloodedness, the half-broken morals, the need to survive. Throw in some conflict of loyalty, because that’s his tragic flaw. He’s incapable of betraying those who truly trust him, just the same as he’s totaly comfortable with killing for survival.

Comment on [Pitch Black/Riddick] Puppet on a string; Riddick/male, slash by Furyan Goddess

Furyan Goddess — Mon, 25 Feb 2008 21:05:09 +0000

hummmmm….. yummy

Comment on [Pitch Black/Riddick] Addicted; Riddick/male, slash by BlackBirch

BlackBirch — Mon, 25 Feb 2008 20:55:19 +0000

Thank you! And I plan to, when I have time. At the moment RL work is kicking my ass, so it’ll have to wait a while to be set on print. Stories are alive and kicking in my head though *g*